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Mehmet: Good afternoon Sir

Can: Good afternoon! Are you going to go out with your boat?

Mehmet: Yes, I want to spend the evening on the sea watching the sunset.

Can: It is a good idea but It isn’t convenient for you because it is going to rain

Sanem: We spent an amazing afternoon at the seaside.

During the sunset He kissed me.

I looked in his eyes and I felt like luckiest girl in the world. 

I was full immersed in my thoughts when Can said me :”Are You alive?”

….

In the evening He invited me to a romantic dinner with our friends, Alper and Arzu.

Those were wonderful moments which seem so far away and gone forever.

We used to be happy and cheerful; we loved each other and our story was going on really well. 

 

FLASHBACK

Can tells about their first meeting 

 

Can: ”This is the restaurant where I took Sanem for our first dinner”

Sanem:” Yes, I remember, that was fantastic, I loved it, and I hope You guys will enjoy it too!”

Can:” Here the meet is delicious!”

Sanem: “I advice you to order it”

 

FINISH FLASHBACK

Sanem: He hugged me with his strong arms and I felt protected. He remind me an albatross.

Speaker 1: Can I ask a question? Why does He remind you an albatross?

Sanem: because in addiction to being a bird with large wings it always travels in a couple and to me it stands for an important male figure.

On the other side I can mirror myself in the Phoenix. As the bird was able to be reborn from it ashes of emerald.

Speaker 2: Is the novel based on a true love story?

Sanem: Yes, mine.

….

Higit: The presentation was really good.

Would you like to go to a café and take something together?

Sanem: No, thanks, I prefer to stay on my own, and think about myself. See you later.

….

 

 SANEM'S MONOLOGUE 

 

Oh no it’s raining. Let’s look for a shelter; Fortunately there’s a cinema over there! I should enter in.

 

INSIDE THE CINEMA

 

Let’s buy a ticket for “The bad King”. 

What is the meaning of my life? To be or not to be? W. Shakespeare was right; I believe one must find a meaning on his own. This walk is painful: it makes me think of past, unforgotten times. I shiver and feel unstable. Oh, Gosh, look at the sky. It getting cloudier and cloudier, grey like my mood. What is this thunder? I must walk faster but it is not easy. There are so many sideways in this small town as if you were walking through twisted village streets. Oh, it’s raining! My God, I haven’t got an umbrella. I must find a shelter. Look, there is a cinema over there. Oh, what a coincidenc The Bad King is on. That is where I can go. I have so many hours before my flight. I am lucky. There’s no queue. I feel relieved. Well, I go into the cinema hall and take a breath. The movie is stunning: it reminds my love story. Its melancholy perfectly suits my mood. I feel invaded by flames. How can I forget the sense of solitude that has been with me for a year? God only knows. But, wait, there is also passion in some scenes, a kind of liberation. They make me cry but possibly, I can get rid of the burden I am carrying with me. What is happening? What noise is the one disturbing my thoughts. Let’s look around and find out! That shape looks familiar. I may be wrong; it is so dark inside here. Oh, no! Is that Can? I am not sure. Do I hallucinate again? Oh my goodness, I am panicking. I feel powerless. I would better go outside and look for some fresh air.

 

 CAN'S MONOLOGUE

 

Oh I was sure It was going to rain! Let’s go into that cinema so I don’t get wet.

There’s a girl in front of me… her perfume remembers me someone I know very well.

Is she Sanem!? Oh my god She is really her!

INSIDE THE CINEMA

 

Baybe it’s better if I don’t sit and I stay here near the door watching her.

Oh how beautiful is she! She is always the same perfect girl. 

I want to talk with her but maybe it isn’t the right moment. She is very involved by the film.

Why is she crying and smiling at the same time?

I wander what she is thinking about. 

I don’t want to ruin this moment, I should go and stay on own.

 

 

THE DIALOGUE BETWEEN CAN AND HIS GRANDMOTHER

 

Grandmother: Hi Can! It’s been a long time since I met you.

Can: Oh my dear! Yes, It’s been a long time but you’re always the same, you look like young lady

Grandmother: Don’t be silly, where have you been all this time?

Can: I had to leave for work, I stayed all this time on my boat, and I visited a lot of beautiful places!

I land in Italy, Spain and Argentina

Grandmother: Oh that’s amazing, but you forgot an important thing that I will tell you later, I know You are surely interested in it!

….

 

THE MEETING BETWEEN EMRE AND AZIZ

 

Aziz: Hi Emre!

Emre: Dad?! Are you come back?

Aziz: Yes! I return this morning and I feel very well, let’s sit and have a cup of tea

Emre: I’m very happy to see you! Yes, I need to drink something

Aziz: How is going on with Leyla?

Emre: I want to ask her to marry me, what do you think?

Aziz: I think It’s a great idea! I like Leyla, She is a very genuine and intelligent girl! 

Does the company work well?

Emre: The company is improving, but can leaves and I had to take his place as a director

Aziz: Yes, I know. He warned me before leaving.

I didn’t tell you because I trust you.

Emre: I knew that Can is just arrive in Instambul  

Aziz: This is a wonderful news! We could organize a welcome party

Emre: I don’t think It’s a good idea, He doesn’t deserve it, after what He did for the company!

Aziz: Come on Emre, He is always your brother….

Emre: Okay..

 

 

THE CONTINUE OF THE DIALOGUE BETWEEN CAN AND HIS GRANDMOTHER

 

Grandmother: What I want to tell you is that you have been selfish and you didn’t care a lot about people you had around

Can: Why do you think so?

Grandmother: Because you left us 

Can: you’re right infact I’m very regretted, I have thought a lot by myself, on my boat.

From this experience I changed. Now I’m ready to take care of people I love and recover the waste time

Grandmother: I’m so happy to hear it and I have an important gift that will remind you some past feelings

Can: What is it about?

Grandmother: It’s a novel wrote by Sanem!

Can: Oh thank you, see you soon grandma

Grandmother: Bye my sweet nephew  

 

 

THE CALL WITH THE FRIEND MERVE

 

Sanem: Hi Merve, I think I have just seen Can at the cinema, but I may be wrong.

Merve: Are you serious!? Can!?, Why were you at the cinema?

Sanem: Because it started to rain and that was the nearest shelter and moreover I has been attracted by the movie’s cover: “The bad king”.

I don’t know why He was there!

Merve: Maybe He could be there for work or only for visit his family.

Sanem: I’m very panicking and I feel powerless, I need your advice. Can you help me?

Merve: Don’t worry, You have to stay calm and take a breath.

Don’t think about negative aspects but the positive ones!

How was it seeing Him after all this time? 

Sanem: He looks more like one coming from a distant wild and magic world I can not even imagine where from. I feel confused and full of contradictory feelings.

Merve: Does He changed a lot?

Sanem: Oh yes! Now He has got longer hair, They seem to be very soft and scented.

Also his cloths changed a lot, He wears in a more ethnic stile, like me.

I don’t understand my thoughts on the one hand I’m afraid, on the other I think things can still get right.

However, thanks for your help, Merve.

You are a real friend.

Merve: You are welcome, this is my duty! Bye!

Sanem: Bye, see you soon!