Textuality » 4A Interacting
EXERCISE 1
a)The most dangerous moments:
- "The wave that came upon me again, buried me at once 20 or 30 foot deep in its own body; and I could feel my self carried with a mightly force and swiftness towards the shore a very great way; but I held my breath, and assisted my self to swim still forward with all my might."
- "I was covered again with water a good while, but not so long but I held it out; and finding the water had spent it self, and began to return, I strook forward against the return of the waves, and felt ground again with my feet."
- "But I recovered a little before the return of the waves, and seeing I should be covered again with the water, I resolved to hold fast by a piece of the rock, and so to hold my breath, if possible, till the wave went back."
b)The description is based on emotions.
EXERCISE 2
a)
The fury of the sea:
- The wave that came upon me again buried me at once twenty or thirty feet deep in its own body [...].
- I was covered again with water a good [...].
- But neither would this deliver me from the fury of the sea, which came pouring in after me again; and twice more I was lifted up by the waves and carried forward as before, the shore being very flat.
- The last time of these two had well-nigh been fatal to me, for the sea having hurried me along as before, landed me, or rather dashed me, against a piece of rock [...].
- [...] before the return of the waves, and seeing I should be covered again with the water, I resolved to hold fast by a piece of the rock, and so to hold my breath, if possible, till the wave went back [...].
- [...] next wave, tho' it went over me, yet did not so swallow me up as to carry me away [...].
Passive verbs :
- I was covered
- I was lifted up by the waves
- The sea having hurried me [...] dashed me [...] left me
Robinson's actions:
- [...] but I held my breath, and assisted my self to swim still forward with all my might. I was ready to burst with holding my breath, when, as I felt my self rising up, so to immediate relief, I found my head and hands shoot out above the surface of the water; and though it was not two seconds of time that I could keep my self so, yet it relieved me greatly, gave me breath and new courage.
- I strook forward against the return of the waves, and felt ground again with my feet. I stood still a few moments to recover breath [...]
- [...] but I recovered a little before the return of the waves, and seeing I should be covered again with the water, I resolved to hold fast by a piece of rock, and so to hold my breath, if possible, till the wave went back; now as the waves were not so high as at first, being nearer land, I held my hold till the wave abated, and then fetched another run, which brought me so near the shore [...]
- [...] and the next run I took, I got to the main land, where, to my great comfort, I clambered up the clifts of the shore and sat me down upon the grass, free from danger, and quite out of the reach of the water. I was now landed and safe on shore, and began to look up and thank God that my life was saved in a case wherein there was some minutes before scarce any room to hope.
b) The two agents of the struggle are Robinson Crusoe and the sea. Robinson appears more as a passive agent.
c)
- faith
- presence of mind
- courage
- sense of self
EXERCISE 3
a)
- the words are ordinary and concrete
- the sentences are long and syntactically complex
- the language is factual and straight to the point
b)
- The wave that came upon me again buried me at once twenty or thirty feet deep in its own body, and I could feel myself carried with a mighty force and swiftness towards the shore - a very great way;
-I was ready to burst with holding my breath, when, as I felt myself rising up, so, to my immediate relief, I found my head and hands shoot out above the surface of the water; and tho' it was not two seconds of time that I could keep myself so, yet it relieved me greatly, gave me breath, and new courage.