Reveled: Industrial Revolution was powered by child slaves

TASK:

Write an argumentative text. Organise its paragraphs according to the points below

1. Introduction
2. Identify the thesis of the article
3. Identify the main function of each paragraph
4. Identify the most relevant information given and its consequences
5. Identify the data that are considered basic to the thesis
6. Draw your personal conclusion.

The Industrial Revolution has resulted many important changes, as the same time as the intelligent reader can find some critical problems born during this period.

In this article I’m going to analyse the problems, the causes of born and which are the views to change this phenomenon.

Factory owners during the 18^th century understand that is easy create work force composed of children: not need paid but only given dormitory and accommodation.

They could be creating factories in which worked children because Industrialisation removed rigid social control over young people.

It has passed two and a half centuries and in some parts of the world the child exploitation is not perished.

Often came out many articles in the newspaper, which denounce big marks, brand that use children for manpower. They can do it because in that country there are not institution that control this phenomenon or the people who work in that institution are paid by corporation for not see.

This is the most problem that in my opinion have to be fight: if the institution control carefully that children are not utilize in the factory, the problem will be disappear.

This problem would be evaded if every state involves mainly children in education: in many poor state children cannot go to school because their family commit to work.